I see you in the darkness,
hiding in the shadows
seeking out a kill
to make your name.
I feel you reaching out,
trying to pull me back,
keep me in these haunted halls
that seek someone to blame.
- Author: JustABird ( Offline)
- Published: May 3rd, 2017 13:37
- Category: Gothic
- Views: 34
Comments3
I like this. It reminds me of some one I know😠Well written🤗
Thank you so much.
🤗
Welcome back. Delighted to see your latest offering does not disappoint the darkness within.
The last two lines particularly are very beautiful.
Thank you. That's my favorite part too.
I enjoyed this; it's quite atmospheric. Good write.
It's nice to know I achieved my mark, then. Thank you.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.