I'm breaking
Scattering around
Pieces of me
Fall to the ground
If I pick them up
They just slip away
Out of grasp
They have to stay
I can't be put together
Not anymore
So I'll stay here
All over the floor
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Author:
Naeners (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I found this in my diary from a few years ago and it's not the best but I appreciate the beginning of my interest in poetry. Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
I enjoyed it. Love the ending especially. Short and sweet. Well done.
I think this poem is excellent.
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