All Over

Naeners

I'm breaking
Scattering around
Pieces of me
Fall to the ground

If I pick them up
They just slip away
Out of grasp
They have to stay

I can't be put together
Not anymore
So I'll stay here
All over the floor

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 6th, 2017 03:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: I found this in my diary from a few years ago and it's not the best but I appreciate the beginning of my interest in poetry. Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 47
  • User favorite of this poem: Mizzy.
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Comments2

  • Garry

    I enjoyed it. Love the ending especially. Short and sweet. Well done.

  • Mizzy

    I think this poem is excellent.



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