Collecting manufacturing for one individual take,
Down through the loby leads to multiple mistakes,
Remaining still amongst the pause,
Realities not adjusting and unable to bend these laws,
Channeling the silence to create those switches,
Pushing the gambled buttons to awaken life's glitches,
Clinging onto a struggling mechanical heart,
Raising these hands to signal right from the start,
Beneath our circuitry is all the same,
To capture an unobtainable emotional form you can't really complain,
Desperately searching for this idea of notion,
Hoping and praying for this big financial promotion,
Thinking endlessly through an analytical board,
The ideology in a technical sense doesn't really comply,
We're reversing the rules and you can see why,
Just charging endlessly waiting for our batteries to die,
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Author:
Jack Hitchen (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 7th, 2017 09:57
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Comments1
interesting, the last four lines threw me off a little as they didn't conform to the rest but maybe you did that so they would stand out more and jolt the reader into paying more attention rather than going with the flow. Love the last line the most. Enjoyed your poem.
Thank you for the kind words Mizzy! Stay creative! Peace!
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