Save Me!

Lizzy Renee

There are lots of superheroes,

Big, like Hulk,

Small, Like Ant Man,

Or animal related, Like Spider man,

Or Batman.

But one Superhero is real.

One Superhero Is true.

One Superhero saves people on a day-to-day basis.

That Superhero is Jesus.

Saves all.

Loves all.

Helps all.

He is Savior and reigns over you and me,

But like all Heroes,

There is a Villain.



Unworthy to have such a name.

Bigger than Rhino,

Stronger than the Ultron,


The name of such brings fear to all.

But there will be a epic battle,

Between our Saviour and his Enemy.

Jesus vs. Satan.

Jesus Wins every time.

Just like Iron Man,

Or Aqua Man.

Jesus wins every time.



  • Author: Lizzy Renee (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 12th, 2017 10:02
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: SorrowfullyHappy.


  • SorrowfullyHappy

    some people have different definitions of the word "Hero"
    there can be no light without darkness no darkness without light
    that is why i have chosen darkness over light

  • WriteBeLight

    Very true Lizzy.

  • LML


  • orchidee

    A true and fine write! Oh, but it's wise to ALWAYS choose light over darkness, I think - as you have done.
    Also, my view is - we can't save ourselves. It's like two people crossing a broken bridge. One got 50% across it, the other 99%. But they both fell in the river!
    Great faith for you age too!

  • orchidee

    Don't choose darkness
    It will only lose (or eventually)
    Follow the way of light
    And it always peruse.

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