Fiery Passion

Our passion is uncontrollable 

Like a fire, bursting with flames

But our love is soft, gentle like the smoke rising from those flames

The tenderness, reminiscent of the way you run your hands through my hair

Evocative of your fingers lingering over my lips

Your voice so deep and intense,

Every word that falls out those delicate lips so complex yet simple

Your eyes, so intense, full of wonder, feelings and thoughts

Your tears, like honey, sweet and golden

And your love, powerful, like waves crashing against each other during a wild storm.


  • ummbre

    So intense. Good work!

  • Somerica

    Just bravo on the writing. Well described that I felt it. Good work.

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