Doubt to my Friend ?

Rajkumar

One day a friend of mine asked me a question

What is Love ?

 

After a small Thinking i replied

"You see her everywhere ,your hear her voice every time

Fly without feathers and never notice others"

Wait wait he said-This is success love, not about love

 

After a small Thinking i replied

"Take a knife and put through your heart

The pain is nothing of what you got"

Wait wait he said again-This is Love Failure, not about love

 

After a small jerk i said

"You give everything and expect nothing

Give up your entire life in second without any hesitation

This feeling may be felt with your Mom,dad,brothers,sisters

Grand parents ,wife,and even with pets

Humans named the feelings a love"

If your need a practical experience get out and feel yourself - i said

 

 

 

  • Author: Rajkumar (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 29th, 2017 06:18
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 47
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  • swingline

    You covered it I think .

    • Rajkumar

      Thanks line

    • Louis Gibbs

      Love ... not an easy thing to define, but you made a worthy attempt at it. Nice work, Rajkumar!

      • Rajkumar

        Thanks for your support gibs

      • WriteBeLight

        Great question and answers!

        • Rajkumar

          Thanks light....just came by my mind

          • WriteBeLight

            You are very talented!

            • Rajkumar

              Thanks for your support brain..but Not as talented as you..

            • Augustus

              I love the "small thinking".

              • Rajkumar

                Thanks Augustus..hoped you enjoyed

              • Rajkumar

                Thank you damaged soul...I never expected such an wonderful comment..once again I thank for selecting my poem as yours favorite and encouraging me



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