Deep dark, as bold as black
Once you know, there’s no turning back
But to understand you must close your eyes
Picture a scene, imagery. Beside the tide?
If today was your very last day
Were on this earth would you like too stay
Somewhere religious, where you could sit and pray
Or somewhere bright, happy or grey
Now were ever you are
No matter how distant and far
Rather you got there by plane or by car
Maybe you followed the brightest of stars
Its who your with that will make matters count
Chose some one who will stay, wont bail out or bounce
Someone who cares for you, who’s always there for you
Who will be with you regards of the cost?
Who would leave to find you, when ever your lost
Who’s stayed and loved you days and nights through
Who’s going to stay regards of what you do
Who’s going to stay loyal and true
So who’s going to sacrifice everything for you?
In your whole lifetime you’ll count on one palm
Real friends that are with you it wont go over one hand
I’m not talking about family or relations by blood
Who else will stay through the dirt and the mud
Who ever they are then that’s who you should
Love unconditionally if only you could
For you probably don’t see past the disfigured hood
But I bet if you seen, then believe me you would
So open your eyes
Stop believing the lies
Who chats you up just to create a smile
Who supports your weird unique style
See there the only person who’s even worth while.
God I hope you don’t lose them
For you cannot chose them
And your looking right past them
And there going to go
Everyone moves on
They can only be ignored for so long
They stayed through the dusk and dawns
But now there fading until there all gone
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Author:
M.M (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: i know the verses and rhyme scheme is way off. but i wrote the poem ages ago and the message is worth receiving so i never changed any of it. when i found myself being taken advantage of, when i found people dictating when to talk to me, when they needed me. how they used me when ever they felt like it , i cut them off and started looking deeper into the things people do for me so i have never left anything un appreciated ever since.
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Comments5
One nice poem mocuisle...even if you have written long ago ,its wonderfulness never decreased
thank'you! i really appreciate it
Very very good poem
Never change a word
Its message is perfect
Love it....
thank'you! it really means a lot to hear that
Perfect message, written in a perfect way. Keep up the good work.
thank'you so much
Amazing! Love the message
thank'youu
Great poem, great message. Inspiring
thank'you
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