A Soldier's Life

Ternic73

As the sun rises, bodies stir

Yesterdays adventures one big blur

Scary dreams, screaming voices

Battles fought without choices

Mind racing, body numb

Boots on the floor, pickup my gun

Another patrol lives on the line

No going without my canine

Walking the streets eyes all around

Bullets fly, hit the ground

Innocents screaming running scared

Stand up and fight, soldiers dare

A soldiers life is beyond compare

Mind racing, body numb

Hands and fingers tight on my gun

As the sun sets, the day winds down

Soldiers boots still on the ground

Sitting on their racks, take a deep breath

Another day done, survived death

Laying down, eyes closed and eerie calm

Body numb, mind racing waiting for dawn

  • Author: Ternic73 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 2nd, 2017 13:11
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: kayweejade
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  • P.H.Rose

    Just brilliant sir
    Love it....
    Power in every phrase
    Oops!! Just looked
    Your a lady.. sorry..
    I wrote a poem about
    Nurses called
    "Ladies of the lamp,
    Heroines without bullets"
    If you get the time please
    Read, I'd like to know what
    You think of it...

    • Ternic73

      LOL thank you I will read your work asap

    • Augustus

      You did a good job of getting into a soldiers mind. Like the canine. For comparison, go to my profile and check out Nam" from may 26.

    • Bibbeck

      Fabulous write! How can you think this is not good. Great insight into a soldier's mind - respect. Please read 'Reality Check' & let me know your view. Look forward to your next write.

      • Ternic73

        Thank you Bibbeck! I am my own worst critic I guess.

        • Bibbeck

          That's good to keep you pushing to your best though - just don't break. 😀

          • Ternic73

            LOL I will try not to break. to be honest I started writing poetry by accident so didn't even know I was any good at it. Lol

          • kayweejade

            Wow!! I could picture your words so vividly! Amazing poem!



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