Breathe
Breathe deeply
Until your lungs can't hold anymore
Then let it all go
In one take
Your feelings
Your thoughts
Watch them float away like dust in space
Travelling to planets to take them away
Remember to breathe
Fly away
Go on a journey
With stars in your hands and feet
Constellations in your eyes
Forget about your worries and cares
Bid them goodbye
Always breathe
- Author: ShannonXx ( Offline)
- Published: June 2nd, 2017 15:03
- Category: Spiritual
- Views: 35
Comments5
Nice poem, Shannon, I enjoyed it
Thank you and I'm glad 🙂
Breathing can be very therapeutic. Breathe in the goodness and breathe out all the bad. Nicely done.
I completely agree and thank you
Very good lady.
Very good indeed
Thank you 🙂
well written shan..
Thank you
A fine write. Erm, I tried giving up breathing for 24 hours one day (??). Did I? How come I'm still here?! heehee.
But we can get in a hyper-state where we 'forget' to breathe, i.e. we don't breathe properly.
Thanks, haha yeah I know what you mean
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