Galleon

Poetae Opus

I know,
I can navigate,
On the ocean's quietness;

On these blue waters,
I only see your face,
Through dark waves;

The next shore is still afar,
From my reach,

And I swear that,
One day,
I will arrive there;

Many navigators aspire,
To swim in the ocean,

But they ignore,
How deep it is,

For it's unwise to get,
Rather than seeing;

And my soul is still finding,
His own reign,

But the Blindness still persists,
Like a sweet honey,
Ready to eat;

How much long,
Might I still wait,
For I realize,
About my way?

  • Author: Poetae Opus (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 4th, 2017 16:31
  • Category: Reflection
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Comments2

  • Ethan

    This is really nice. The only comment I have is to change "I just see your face in the waves". Write something like "I only see your face in the waves". It gets rid of problems with flow.

    • Poetae Opus

      Thanks for your comment. I'll consider your advice.

    • Augustus

      Thought provoking. Enjoyed

      • Poetae Opus

        Thanks for your comment.



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