To me, you're the moon's gravitational pull.
I'm the ocean waves.
You're a small force with strong effects.
I'm deep, engulfing, and directionless.
You pull me into shore, and I've found a place to be.
I feel so infatuated until I'm yanked back seconds later.
My euphoria is left at the shore, making me ache to go back.
I savor and crave those moments I crashed into your bliss.
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Author:
Lex (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I feel like this poem doesn't express my feelings enough. I long to be with him and I have such strong feelings for him, but it can never be. He treats me badly but I still love him (very pathetic, I know). Is there any way I can express that better? Or any other general critiques?
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Hey you are all good. I understand, I was like that too once. Keep writing, you're good at it. Plus helps some people to express these hidden emotions with others.
Thank you so much, I will 🙂
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