When the reliable blade rips open my innocent skin
Whilst my startled eyes gape at the purple flesh within.
The monstrous voices commanding me that it's some sort of self discipline.
Just Do It
The admirable voices informing me that it's some sort of sin.
Just Quit It!
Insanely i miss witnessing the inner demons within me crying out for any form of support.
When I'm in school, I'm just afraid that someone stupid will glance at the scars and then report.
I know the demons knocking desperately against my fragile skin to break loose
Yet I carefully carve out my originality and habitually self abuse.
Don't worry about me, i admire the foul blood flowing down my skin
Some consider I'm a gory lunatic, and all i do is pass them a grin.
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A close friend of mine just admitted that she cuts to me. Do you have any advice? I want to help her stop, but im overwhelmed with my own thoughts and worries. Great write, by the way
I do it as well, so i dont know. But one thing you have to remember is, never say you're going to leave her if she cuts, all i can say is be there for her and when she does feel like cutting try distracting her. And thank you x
Okay, thank you. She's opened up to me, now I feel guilty for not opening up to her. X stay strong
Thank you x
#hopey#
you may not be able to put a stop to it over night, although you should show support, let them know you are there for them. even if it\'s chilling and listening to music, support them, be a shoulder to cry on and someone to talk to x
this is amazingly beautiful and dark, you should continue to write in this style. you write so exact similar to me and i love it. Usually i feel alone because nobody understands, but since i have started poetry there are so many similar people to me x
Thank you so much it means a lot to me, just a small comment makes me smile. I feel the same, ever since I started writing I realised there's a lot of people who feel the same, and it's amazing to know people appreciate your poems. I love the way you write too keep it up x
thankyou x
Great write! Stay safe, and pray...
Thank you! Its really appreciated:)
I like the truth in this. A lot of people either throw themselves out there for people to eat up, or don't say enough. This is brutally honest. I love that.
My poems are always brutally honest, thank you so much it means a lot x
Amazing writing. Love your style
Thank you so much x
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