Reveling layers like onion and crying of joy and sorrow.
Adding dimensions in the layers of awareness.
Watching deeply into my eyes in the mirror.
Smiling and kissing myself.
Playing life seriously...
who am i, really?
Reveling layers like onion and crying of joy and sorrow.
Adding dimensions in the layers of awareness.
Watching deeply into my eyes in the mirror.
Smiling and kissing myself.
Playing life seriously...
who am i, really?
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Coming into awareness of self is a beautiful process. Congratulations, avigail!
thank you Louis
I cry too when I peel onions. All kidding aside, we are many layers. Kissing yourself is accepting all those layers. Nicely done
thank u Augustus
Is first word spelled right ? Reveling or revealing ? Anyway I used revealing . But the analogy is spot on when we consider who or what we are By examining.our lives definitely means pealing back the layers of time which sometimes does bring tears to one eyes . But when we do peal an onion it is because we have future plans for it's use .
yes Swingline an onion pealing has a purpose...of whats next... No-thing...
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