With the sun portraying your eyes
In their olive green hint
With your smile beaming
Keeping your face lit
As your hair flows like flowers in the wind
Your beautiful anatomy on all life's bliss
Accompanies your positive outlook on all that's missed
Your tender heart loving others
Pumping blood through your body to keep it strong
While focusing on others
Forgetting what you've lost
Your joyful spirit dancing round in light
Encouraging others who feel they've lost their fight
You protect and help them to survive
You really are one of a kind
So never change
Never listen to what others say
Focus on yourself
Being who you are
With care, love and devotion given from your beating heart
But if your sun ever does go down
Never lose your shine from your olive green eyes
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I love the words "focus" in this.
You tell the subject to focus on life which is perfect because they are a personification of light, which can be focused to make light brighter.
Well done.
Thank you
Does he wear tinted contacts ? A glowing account of a star on the rise .
Haha no he doesn't and thx for the comment
Lovely poem Shannon
Thank you
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