Poetic Dan


  • It may of been just a little time
    But we both soon jump in

    I personally hit the bottom
    With a feeling I can't breathe

    Drowning of emotions
    May of made me flee

    Upon moments of reflection
    Theses feelings are running deep

    There must be a reason
    When I first met you

    Playing a photograph game
    Something completely new

    The gift I may of left you
    Was only minimal

    The survival kit was needed
    To help catch my fall

    In days of distance
    Time stood truly still

    Brain doing is best
    Rationalising this ordeal

    Trying to recall correctly
    My messages came soon

    What if we are doing
    Something we're ment too

    That line I owe completely to you

    The moment came
    To meet face to face

    Your arms went around
    Back in the pool I was place

    No longer drowning
    Deep breath from within

    For this I thank you fofinha
    Helping me learn to swim

    From the very beginning
    Hearts were on our sleeves

    Now we're both flying
    No longer just floating

    An infinite amount of possibilities
    Awaiting us on that next breeze

    Already I am seeing unthinkable
    Changes within this being

    Between us, friends and family
    It's all the wealth I'll ever need

    As I'm the richest Pirate
    Of the boundless Sea


  • Augustus

    I like the survival kit. Poem too.

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