Abandoned
I am crying because of you
Not of what you did
But what you did not do
I am crying by the way
Not of what you said
But what you did not say
I am crying out of fear
Not of what you heard
But what you did not hear
I am crying eyes all pink
Not of what you thought
But what you did not think
I am crying without pause
Not of what you caused
But what you did not cause
I am crying don’t you see
Because you never ever
Have been here for me
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 20th, 2017 01:53
- Category: Sad
- Views: 90
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Comments8
If this is an example of future writes from you....then i am defintiely quitting writing lol....very well done....an excellent poem. Great job
This is real and well written. Evokes so much emotion
Thank you Jeff and Harvey! Your encouragement helps to overcome all the self doubts.
Yes, I really liked your poem. Hope I can read more of that. Thank you.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. This is incredibly moving and well thought out. Great work.
Misunderstanding and expectations are the roots of all our trepidation. If only we had the time to stop and think. If ego didn't exist. Imagine where we all could be? No regrets.
Thank you everybody, it is a pleasure and honor to be a part of this group!
Loved the style and flow if your poem.
Thank you sue, I do appreciate your comment!
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