onepauly

good times

 

to walk in the world with pleasure

is most certainly a treasure

so as the world spins round the sun

not a thing becomes undone

for all and all are bound together

just as the weather or not

in our lot as we ourselves are not forgot

Comments3

  • FredPeyer

    Yes, we are all living in the same boat, stuck into this little corner of the Universe. And look what we are doing to it. One day it might not be such a pleasure anymore to walk around here. Thank you for a great poem.

    • onepauly

      stay positive my friends

    • malubotelho

      I've read your poem and your byografy and tried to imagine a young man sitting by a fire writing on his notebook. Quite romantic. Was like a movie scene on my head. Thanks for it.

      • onepauly

        if we believe they are good times they will be.
        most people are interested or attracted
        to negative titled poems.
        is it the intrigue?
        if you find out why. please let me know.
        thanks

        • malubotelho

          Good point. I've noticed that most of the poems are sad or like you said, negative. I was trying to understand it and what came to me is that; we poets like to feel the pain because the pain means pleasure and content for the soul. Troubled soul.
          Might be because we feel simpathetic for sufferers. I say that when you feel the pain with conscious you transform the pain into beauty because you don't judge but rather observe it.

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        • Ethan

          Nice job. This is nice.

          • onepauly

            thanks ethan



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