to walk in the world with pleasure
is most certainly a treasure
so as the world spins round the sun
not a thing becomes undone
for all and all are bound together
just as the weather or not
in our lot as we ourselves are not forgot
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Author:
onepauly (
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- Comment from author about the poem: it makes me feel good
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Yes, we are all living in the same boat, stuck into this little corner of the Universe. And look what we are doing to it. One day it might not be such a pleasure anymore to walk around here. Thank you for a great poem.
stay positive my friends
I've read your poem and your byografy and tried to imagine a young man sitting by a fire writing on his notebook. Quite romantic. Was like a movie scene on my head. Thanks for it.
if we believe they are good times they will be.
most people are interested or attracted
to negative titled poems.
is it the intrigue?
if you find out why. please let me know.
thanks
Good point. I've noticed that most of the poems are sad or like you said, negative. I was trying to understand it and what came to me is that; we poets like to feel the pain because the pain means pleasure and content for the soul. Troubled soul.
Might be because we feel simpathetic for sufferers. I say that when you feel the pain with conscious you transform the pain into beauty because you don't judge but rather observe it.
we can never imagine
the pain that others feel
but its like you said,
its our sympathetic feelings
Nice job. This is nice.
thanks ethan
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