Miss Xtraordinary

Betrayal

I was betrayed,

I was left alone.

I now have no one,

I'm left on my own.

 

I got replaced,

She left me for her.

I hope they won't be,

As happy as we were.

 

I got erased,

Away from her life.

She got rid of me,

Chasing me with a knife.

 

I got tricked,

She lied to me.

But she never knew,

Who I was going to be.

 

I got stabbed,

She was two-faced.

The she killed the real me,

Like a mouse being chased.

 

I got betrayed,

I was left alone.

I now have no one,

I'm left on my own.

-Miss Xtraordinary.

 

Comments5

  • P.H.Rose

    Brilliant such a good write
    Love this kind of poem
    It reads so very well

  • FredPeyer

    And now she will never know what wonderful and "xtraordinary" person you will be....her bad.
    Liked your poem.

  • Miss Xtraordinary

    Thank you all so much for the positive comments! :) Makes me really happy!

  • Borys

    I'm so happy that I found this website. This poem is great. It outlines all the pain we can go through when we are betrayed. Keep on writing.

    • Miss Xtraordinary

      I'm happy you think so! And I will, I just published another poem based on betrayal if you would like to read it. :)

    • yellowrose

      ''tricked'' stabbed '' erased '' '' betrayed '' sounds painful , i enjoyed reading this, a well thought out poem



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