a notion for emotion
this be a good potion
with fine words to feed
there is a lot less greed
breathing rythmatically easier
more time for pragmatic leisure
percieving lifes beauty now and here
then we begin to see it everywhere
the soul is seen souly for good purposes
after reaching screeching and much fuss
poof theres a whole new earth
for what it may be worth
let us join the new birth
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Author:
onepauly (
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nicely crafted, my friend.
thank you for the comment
and being my friend
you're very welcome, onepauly x
What is it? The promised land? Less greed and more time free. I like this. Get me in. Nice rhyme. Well done.
you as well as others are
already a member
thank you for your comment
Welcome dear.
Paul, poets are optimists. To be in a place like you describe would be heaven, unfortunately my body is kinda bound to reality. Nice poem!
after reaching screeching and much fuss.
do you want to become a member?
its all there
free for the guiding
thank you for the comment.
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