Miss Xtraordinary

I miss you

I miss you,

This feeling won't fade.

I don't like our ending,

Not for the price I paid.

 

I really miss the part of you,

Which would always make me smile.

It was always so much fun,

But only for a while.

 

I really miss the part of you,

That always looked at me.

Not the person I cover behind,

But the one nobody can see.

 

I really miss the part of you,

That would always have a calm voice.

Why did you have to leave?

You didn't give me a choice.

-Miss Xtraordinary 

Comments4

  • Louis Gibbs

    Losing a best friend is tough indeed. Your fine poem does it justice, Miss X!

  • FredPeyer

    How many "best friends" do we have in a lifetime? Two, maybe three? So it hurts. I lost my best friend three years ago forever to somebody called "cancer", and I still miss him.

    • Miss Xtraordinary

      Oh I'm sorry. Guess we all feel the same in life :/ But we move on with our lives. :)

      • FredPeyer

        And that we do beautifully!!!

      • P.H.Rose

        Brilliant.......
        Cannot say anything
        Else... just brilliant...

      • ron parrish aka wordman

        it`s always tough when we lose someone



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