to be within cause and effect
what more could it do but
affect arouse and stimulate
the surrounding circumstances
to change them for the better
when we meditate
on loving all the good
what could it do but
enhance it for the even greater good
which is a greater love for it
that we've started in the first place
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Author:
onepauly (
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- Comment from author about the poem: it means something to me, but I'm puzzled as to what.
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You are right it is puzzling, but that is a good thing! I guess if you like something or somebody and think about why you love it, him, her, you may find that there is an even greater underlying love you were not aware of before.
Does that make sense?
I guess so. ill have to meditate a little more.
It make sense to me. When one uncover love, it can be thrilling to think that love was there from the beginning but you did not see it. Now it is greater because you brought it to the light so you see it better.
your comment is very inspiring
ill meditate on that
thanks
Good choice in using "affect" over "effect" (affect arouse) big difference but ohhhhh, how they sound just the same....great job. I like where this poem places you on the truth continuum.
thanks for the very affectionate comment
and what a beautiful little, loving and full of inspiration to 'enhance it for the even greater good' poem. that's a great piece you have written right there, onepauly.
I am superbly glad you liked it
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