Memories fill my head when I think of you
The way your hand felt against my waist
That feeling I got in my stomach when we held hands
And how our fingers we ever so tightly laced
Most of the memories are the bad ones though
That one night you punched the wall
Because I said "no" to your silly games
And that magical way you could make me feel so small
The memories never go away
Like the one were I told you I loved you more than anyone
But you just said "I know"
And in that moment I knew our relationship was emotionally done
Some memories are sweet like candy
When we went on "romantic" trips
And we fooled everyone that we were such a happy couple
But it was like our relationship was written and we were reading off the scripts
So the memories will never fade
Because they are a part of me
Just like you were
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Author:
IvyLynn Michelle (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is one of the poems I'm actually really proud of and I hope you read it and enjoy it.
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Comments1
A beautiful, well written poem that, to me, kind of fell apart at the last line. Forgive me for critiquing, but you might consider just leaving out that last line. It breaks the rhythm and I believe the poem will stand on its own poignantly without it. You are a fine poet and I look forward to more of your work!
Exactly what I thought too, but I didn't know what to do so I just left it.
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