Timeless task

Poetic Dan

This has happened once before in my life, when my awareness changed before my very eyes, that time was different as I had questions to be explained.

This in return felt as though I was one step ahead of the game, challenging my beliefs they just crumbled straight away without even whisper or a word to say

Now I'm not implying that I'm being pushed but it's getting harder to ignore, that my most inner thoughts (some that I blocked) are getting onboard.

I'm not sure if this is faith, a belief in wanting to believe or something completely new, it's definitely not to make it less confusing or prove a point of truth.

All I can say is I'm on my wave going with the pace, connecting stronger as I flow, truly knowing yourself is a time it task to know.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 29th, 2017 13:02
  • Category: Reflection
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Comments4

  • kevin browne

    I think you just proved your point very indeed. leave those unwanted on board thought well alone and get on with your life. great write with reflecting thoughts.

    • Poetic Dan

      Ha! to my understanding(outback) no thought is unwanted 😉

    • FredPeyer

      Beautifully written poem. The last two lines reminded me of how it feels sometimes when I write, like a surfer who caught the perfect wave.

      • Poetic Dan

        Absolutely, like a force of nature our pen just swoop through the page, mightier than the sword some would say.

      • malubotelho

        It is beautiful. Flowing like a ballerina on a stage.

        • Poetic Dan

          I do look good in a toto 😉 thank you

          • malubotelho

            Ha! Lol. I was talking the fluid way that I felt on your poem. If you prefer I can say that it's movement felt like a breeze sweeping through the room. I bet you look good on a toto.

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          • onepauly

            we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with all these other selves.

            • Poetic Dan

              Lol I Swear last night some of them United

              • onepauly

                don't get them mixed up.

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