This has happened once before in my life, when my awareness changed before my very eyes, that time was different as I had questions to be explained.
This in return felt as though I was one step ahead of the game, challenging my beliefs they just crumbled straight away without even whisper or a word to say
Now I'm not implying that I'm being pushed but it's getting harder to ignore, that my most inner thoughts (some that I blocked) are getting onboard.
I'm not sure if this is faith, a belief in wanting to believe or something completely new, it's definitely not to make it less confusing or prove a point of truth.
All I can say is I'm on my wave going with the pace, connecting stronger as I flow, truly knowing yourself is a time it task to know.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Category: Reflection
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I think you just proved your point very indeed. leave those unwanted on board thought well alone and get on with your life. great write with reflecting thoughts.
Ha! to my understanding(outback) no thought is unwanted 😉
Beautifully written poem. The last two lines reminded me of how it feels sometimes when I write, like a surfer who caught the perfect wave.
Absolutely, like a force of nature our pen just swoop through the page, mightier than the sword some would say.
It is beautiful. Flowing like a ballerina on a stage.
I do look good in a toto 😉 thank you
Ha! Lol. I was talking the fluid way that I felt on your poem. If you prefer I can say that it's movement felt like a breeze sweeping through the room. I bet you look good on a toto.
I laughed so well. Thank you
Welcome
we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with all these other selves.
Lol I Swear last night some of them United
don't get them mixed up.
Hahaha but it's so much fun
of course ha! ha! ha!
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