Live, learn and figure out

Poetic Dan

  • This is something I feel I need to express
    Hopefully getting it of my chest

    This is straight out thoughts
    Like how most of my writing works

    Thinking how wonderful my life is
    After reading & giggling with the kids

    To kiss them good night
    Awaiting morning hugs and smiles

    Makes me so glad that
    I failed and didn't take
    The quick trail

    straight after this feeling of bliss
    I felt a friend who I Sawley miss

    Sadly she went down this path
    Weight of her thoughts just to much to bear

    Last time we spoke was on the phone
    Laughing like nothing is wrong

    Saying we have to catch up soon
    Suddenly soon was no longer available

    We'd spoke heart to heart
    Within the years of crossing paths
    Both having scars unable to fix

    The sense of empowerment
    She gave me, or to any open to see

    Our connection was so strong
    For her to open on those wounds

    Now I've lost my point, if there was one at all

    I open my self, no truth I hold back, the parts I'm ashamed of and ones that make me question this life.

    This is why I guess I'm now on here doing this
    As this problem that we go through, can not be cured like a disease

    I don't know how to stop some one from wanting to leave this plane

    expressing every thought and feeling
    Stopped me in so many ways

    And if I hadn't I'd not of met so many amazing eyes, what help me be the man I am before my very own

    So Dee (Donna) this is for the part you played
    For making sure I always say what I say


    I can't remember how long it's been
    But that doesn't matter as every day your missed, with this feeling you still give me I put into every essence of my being and will share with others, maybe make a difference.
  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 1st, 2017 06:45
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments1

  • kevin browne

    And i making it not a 'maybe' but 'a huge difference' instead. lets mix our thoughts together. great write my friend.

    • Poetic Dan

      Cheers buddy, your comment means alot



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