Give and Take

Whoami

I love you
You've given me your all
I've taken all you were
I wanted to give you the world
I just took it away
You've given me your love and compassion
You've taken my complacency and apathy
You bent over backward to make me happy and comfortable
I sucked your heart dry and spat it at your feet
You've given me your pleas
I've taken your hope
I wanted to give you the happiness that you deserved
I just took away your smile
You've given me your suffering
You've taken my regret
You walked away with anguish and sadness
I felt your hatred for me outweigh my own
I miss you

  • Author: Whoami (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 2nd, 2017 13:50
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments2

  • burning-embers

    Yes DS/KS said it all. Very honest work.

  • FredPeyer

    An incredible description of a break-up. Want to read more from you! And btw, DSKS comment did say it rather well.



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