Cigarettes and lines of cocaine left on my nightstand.I wish you would stop but you gon always do you.
You only ever tell me you love me when your nostrils are filled with that shit.
Damn I wish you would quit, you got me on a guilt trip.
I wonder what you do, cuz for some reason I can't leave you.
I know I shouldn't love you i'm only 17,
what would my parents say if they found out you touch me.
I'm in love with an addict what can I say, I guess we all get fucked up in our own way.
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Author:
ForeverAW (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this one is kinda shitty it's called 23 because that's how old he was when we met
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Addicts are in love with their addiction. That love can turn to hating their addiction. Wotever condition you 'lover' is in, you're not his love. Your writing is immediate and illustrative. Very strong. Awful subject crying off my screen. More please.
Raw, emotional, and to the point. Good writing, sounds as if written by somebody much older. What can I say, you are very good a writing, not so good in choosing your lover. Just a little bit of advise from a guy who has been around the block a few times. Try to get out before it gets worse!
thank you ! we're not together anymore i ended our relationship a while back and moved away from him, but i'm very glad you liked my poem it means alot !
Glad to hear that. Looking forward to your next poem!
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