Relationships always lives marks on us. Each one leaves just some more scars, designed with tears, anger, love, misunderstanding and also joy. I imagine each of those components on different colors. Liquid dyes of sorrow and happiness, cast on our soul with discretion. Eventually one will open the window for someone to see it. You might be the one to have this opportunity now.
I'm a poet, not a mathematician. I will always be liquid form, dripping with emotions related with pain and love. Those feelings can not be denied with in. They create the roads for life to flow. Without feelings all we have is an empty space. A gap on time. Peaceful gap felt with joy sometimes. It is when the mouth drops a bit and the eyes reflects nothing at all.
It is the meditative state of mind.
Life is transition, it can have the nature of a soft summer breeze or be tough as a winter storm. The pain is real then. It is stamped with fire and leave deep scars. Sometimes one only learn with pain. Love does not teach everything. Love is what softens after the pain. It is felt like peace. Like a soft touch from kind hands. Like a warm embrace.
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Author:
Malu (Pseudonym) (
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you're such a smooth and charasmatic writer that once I start I can't stop. pretty much admire every line you wrote. I love this free verse type of style also. a cool write x
Thank you Kevin. Yes, you like to write like this free stile also. I like it but some days my mind speaks like rhymes and I love it too.
we sound like 2 peas in a poetry pod. I also love the rhythm and rhyming. it's a craft which I adore and to show off with.
Wow! I like the way you said it. Two peas in a poetry pod. Too cute and sweet. Thanks. And the rhymes makes my heart dance.
Thanks cat. Those lines forms a poem on itself. Great comment. Very appreciated.
Oh yes. I like that too. Why is it that when we write we don't get a grip of things. This is why the comments enriches our writes. Makes us see better. Thank you.
Beautiful expressions, Malubotelho! "Love is a soft touch from kind hands" indeed! Thank you for sharing this poem from the heart.
Thank you for reading and for commenting.
Beautiful!
You truly deserve to find want it is that you write, peace for the soul.
Thanks for reading. I appreciate the comment.
I find this tremendously inspiring. I've been sat here i don't know how long trying to make some concise comment but i cant because i've got too much to say on the subject. Thank you for inspiring me to write tomorrows poem.
I thank you for reading and yes, it is a long subject. I always try not to write too much and keep my writes as clean as possible.
Thank you for reading and for the lovely comment.
As promised, inspired by 'scars', i have published said verse today.
First of all, thanks for the picture showing the pink hibiscus, Hawaii's State flower (it's actually the bright yellow one, but a hibiscus is a hibiscus).
Comparing feelings to color is so true. (Yesterday I saw red, today I am feeling blue). I just love your writing. It gets under my skin. Once I start reading I cannot stop.
Awe! Thanks. I feel like going back to write right now. I have to go jogging though. I appreciate your kind comment.
Beautiful reflection from the heart of a beautiful woman. There is an undercurrent of peace throughout, even with the tough stuff.
Thanks Heather. Your comments make me feel good.
yes, meditation is able to help soften the scars we take with us in our journey through life.
Yes, I think the scar will be there but it can be just like a tattoo. It pains only when it is being impressed but after it is there just like an art work.
that's a very good way to express it.
So very beautiful, you are such a beautiful soul 💓
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