You're such a whore
I Want some more
Get on the floor
I'll fuck you sore
You're such a bore
I loathe your core
Get out the door
Don't want no more
You're such a whore
- Author: Lost in Murphy ( Offline)
- Published: July 4th, 2017 11:38
- Comment from author about the poem: Have you ever let someone with absolutely no redeeming qualities creep into your life, unfortunately I have. I used to think I had an infinite capacity for forgiveness. Welcome to my darker side.
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Comments2
You're feelings are very well known here I see
I'm writing whatever comes to mind. I've never done this before. Figured I'd share everything. Anything less and you wouldn't really know me.
I'm an open book now it's cathartic
Hey there's nothing wrong with that
Thank you. I will continue to be brutally honest
We strive to be intellectually strong and creatures of delicate feelings don't we. But here you remind us that we, every one of us here, are animals and our basic nature can be brought to the fore by some we meet along our journey. Very brave and strongly (appropriately) presented piece. Good work.
You oh so eloquently described what initially I thought I should keep locked away. Your understanding and support
continues to give me the confidence
to speak from my heart no matter what I may be feeling. Thank you.
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