Give up Give in

SorrowfullyHappy

I finally give up

 I finally give in

I just couldn't keep it up

I just couldn't keep it in

The fake smile on my face

The tears hidden behind

I just hate this place

I finally lost my mind

  • Author: Sora (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 5th, 2017 22:05
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • ezra.mendoza

    Good stuff! A part two would be awesome... what comes after this feeling??

    • SorrowfullyHappy

      i think ill finaly give you your part two

    • kevin browne

      I will second that devotion you have for poetry. it's like four persons speaking to me and I just the listener x

    • SorrowfullyHappy

      i speak from my heart not my mind
      i dont think about what i write i just let the words flow



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