Candlewitch

Virgin (first poem) by eddy styx

"Virgin"

I, the burgeoning eradicator,

dreams haunted by vampires and slayers,

have not yet made my initial conquest.

Decidedly,

I have chosen my first mark...

 

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Comments6

  • Louis Gibbs

    I'd like to have coffee with you someday, if Eddy stays home. Appreciated your poem, Candlewitch.

    • Candlewitch

      lol...thanks, Louis! eddy is usually close behind me, but he walks ten paces behind. Coffee would be good, we could trade stories 🙂

      always, Cat
      ever, eddy

    • orchidee

      oohhh, I don't fancy meeting Eddy. Does he bite people?! heehee.

      • Candlewitch

        only if they give me reason to, LOL!

        ever, eddy
        always, cat

        • orchidee

          Trust me to muck up the 'dark' or 'heavy' bits. Did I have to trivialise it?! lol. Oohh, I should stay with Cat, if I was you.

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        • FredPeyer

          Have to read more from eddy to be sure, but for now I like Cat better!

          • Candlewitch

            thanks for reading, Fred! I'm pleased that someone likes me/cat better!

            I will try to change your mind 😉 ever eddy

          • Augustus

            Hauntingly delicious.

            • Candlewitch

              thank you, Augustus!

              ever, eddy
              always, Cat

            • valene

              well my friend, this is short, not so sweet, well said and I think eddy is not someone to mess with although 'the bitch within' could give him a run for his money and/or 'evil' who takes pleasure in going after whoever she feels like....LOL! hum...then there's chaos...i'll introduce you to her in a pm!

              • Candlewitch

                hey val,

                I really liked chaos...I want more from her! having an alter-ego is so freeing, isn't it?!!!
                thanks for reading and encouraging me onward! 😉

                ever, eddy
                always, Cat

                • valene

                  eddy and chaos would make quite the team! LOL!!!
                  before my darkside came into 'view' i never would have guessed i'd be able to write dark....but all of a sudden there it was and oh yeah it rocks! LOL! thanks for your encouragement as well my friend! 🙂

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                • Godisreal

                  I like it

                  • Candlewitch

                    thank you!

                    ever, eddy
                    always, Cat



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