Chaos wine drunk
from gravity bongs,
liquid nectar visceral
vaginal secretions,
facetious laughing Gabriel
scratching my recoiled mind
jibber-jabber shined.
Landed with miscues
of embedded principles,
wings clipped still
dangerously eclectic,
peel back your skin
from within beautiful sin,
cobwebs of continuance
my illustrious demise.
My own cherry dipped
cock penetrating
my esophagus choke
on lifes equilibrium
golden chalice,
he sneers
at my pain
plain as acid rain
disintegrating my
inner membranes.
Conniving celestial brute
you're in cahoots,
with Mephistopheles
worm racked atrocities,
tis ok really it is
I'll scratch your back
so I can steal thine
glow,
now I show my twisted side
broken back alpha barbaric
purity anal seepage
discharged from your oculars.
How sick is he?
Sick how this be?
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Pretty damned sick I'd say. I need a bath and a towel after reading this. Enjoyed.
Lol. Then I have succeeded. Thank you friend. 🍻
The writing is definitely NOT sick. You use extraordinary language. The subject matter might be upsetting to some people who might object to some of the words, but I think we need to be open to all kinds of creative writing. In my opinion you turned what by some could be regarded as "porn" into a work of art.
I would like to add that I for one am more concentrating on the writing than on the subject matter.
Wow Fred thank you that's a very open-minded comment I appreciate your read and assessment if it's marked adult common sense should raise its flag
Thank you brother 🍻
You're welcome, give praise where praise is earned!
Nicely done. A bold statement. Thank you.
Thank you malu it is a bold statement
Sleep with one eye open miss 🌹
Disturbingly, exotically sick. You're always a hookah trip of strange delights.
Ha ha that is a freaking awesome comment and yes I have partaken in those trips back in the day. Marvelous comment Heather as always dear 🌹🌹
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