- I wake up and I feel empty,
- I wake up and I wanna die so dont tepmt me,
- I wake up and I'm not contempt in what I see,
- I hate the person that is me,
- I created this and I dont wanna be,
- I wake up and feel no glee in sight,
- I wake up and I dont wanna fight,
- I just wanna make it right,
- I know that this isn't alright but its all that I know,
- I wake up and Im low,
- I wake up and get up so slow,
- I wake up feeling cold like snow and I dont know how to live,
- I wake up and pray you forgive me,
- I wake up and I just give,
- I wake up with no motive,
- I wake up and I just dont know any other alternative to this pain in my heart,
- I fall asleep so I don't fall apart,
- I fall asleep and my dreams take no part,
- I fall asleep even though there's no reason to start tomorrow,
- I'm awake but I'm drowning in sorrow,
- I'm awake but I have no more love to borrow,
- I can't take it and I know that I'm gonna break because of every lost morrow and chance,
- I'm cold as frost and my stance is easy to break,
- I have no hand to hold,
- I have no story left to be told,
- My soul is sold already so there's now nothing left to take,
- I'm awake,
- I dont know how or why,
- I know that I should die,
- I already wanna die so dont tempt me.
- I'm awake and I cry,
- I feel so empty.
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July 9th, 2017 01:49
- Comment from author about the poem: My feeling on a daily basis of finding no reason ever good enough to get out of bed to try, eat or even see the sun light.\r\nTo me this how I view my life.\r\nThe feeling of every reason you find to live or try and having it ruled irrelevant by your own mind to the point where everything is pointless.\r\n\r\nThe feeling of empty.
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get a job
How about you suck a dick?
ha! ha! ha!ha! I have no teeth.
That's actually quite depressing.
I like it I stick to hamburger.
Correct English would be nice.
I guess you got me their. find my profile page by clicking my name. you will love my poetry.
I'll take a look
maybe we can become friends I just read your poem no more evil.
What are your thoughts?
very good these days. ive seen a lot of pictures of new jersey
New jerseys tough at times though
Just think for a moment, if your death wish is granted, we would not read your powerful and moving emotions. Well written piece. Looking forward to the next one filled with hope. Thanks for sharing.
I appreciate that greatly. In all honesty the words I write give me some peace.
Thank you for your understanding.
Mine is about death too, i.e. "The Final Call". The context may be entirely different from yours. Hope you find time to read it. Keep writing Xxxplicit.
I'll definitely take a look, and thank you I will
Yes, you do have the gift of honesty. Emptiness is overwhelming all of the time. Great write, thank you for this, keep writing
Thank you very much, it means a lot to me. I needed this boost today.
I'm here if you need a chat
Same here
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