Goodbye green eyed hero ,
Sail high tonight.
Goodbye green eyed hero ,
We have parted ways.
I didn't get my goodbye superman,
I didn't get my warning.
I tried to tag you in a post ,
But your Facebook was gone in the morning.
Goodbye green eyed hero,
That is at least until tomorrow.
When I shall look into those green eyes,
Those green eyes of sorrow .
- Author: Brendon Corey (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: July 9th, 2017 16:48
- Category: Sad
- Views: 27
Comments3
Powerful. Although, I would like to know who this, "Green eyed hero is." Perhaps I'll find out later. Cheers
Nicely balanced
I like that you aren't using alot of figurative language. It's just saying what you want to say. It's hard to lose someone without warning. I have had a recent loss so I know. Thanks for sharing this!
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