Joaquin Finn

GoodBye Green eyed Hero


Goodbye green eyed hero ,
Sail high tonight.

Goodbye green eyed hero ,
We have parted ways.

I didn't get my goodbye superman,
I didn't get my warning.

I tried to tag you in a post ,
But your Facebook was gone in the morning.

Goodbye green eyed hero,
That is at least until tomorrow.

When I shall look into those green eyes,
Those green eyes of sorrow .


  • Nicholas Browning

    Powerful. Although, I would like to know who this, "Green eyed hero is." Perhaps I'll find out later. Cheers

  • Augustus

    Nicely balanced

  • MaddieJ

    I like that you aren't using alot of figurative language. It's just saying what you want to say. It's hard to lose someone without warning. I have had a recent loss so I know. Thanks for sharing this!

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