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whisperingquill

I spew liquid
venom photosynthetic
cyanide from the
mind of Osiris,

lyrical homicide
for your pubescent
shine jagged
whispers of
shuriken design,

rip you with sai's
your mother sigh's
napalm cannon
cascading insurgent
deception bombastic
cluster bombs,

for my tyrannical
procurement
cave painting of your last
sin depicting my win.

Sustainable idiosyncrasy
scandalous auric apathy,

The ruler's back
the return from his
sabbatical like Caesar,

veni, vidi, vici,

for your savage animosity,

displaced rings
from saturn's collapse,

like mad Sam DeStefano
I lay rigor-mortis concerto,

black talons blow,

street credo arrivederci,

ask Pacino he knows.

 

Copyright © 2017 Whisperingquill.All Rights Reserved

  • Author: Whisperingquill (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 9th, 2017 18:05
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • FredPeyer

    Well Whisperingquill, with this poem you "veni, vidi, vici" allright. Nuff said!

  • kevin browne

    Brilliant so can we have more of this, please?

    • whisperingquill

      Kevin if I can write more than one a day on here I will gladly drop more for You brother. 🍻 Cheers

      • kevin browne

        top man.

      • Augustus

        You got a little of that slime on my shoe. If you don't clean it I'm going to come over and kick your arse. LOL

        • whisperingquill

          It's ectoplasmic Augustus lol. That's a good one brother I needed that smile today. Thank you 🍻

        • Heather T

          So today we have an Egyptian god, martial arts weapons, Caesar, Mad Sam and Pacino. If you can't pull that off, then no one can. Veni, vidi, amavi.

        • GODisreal

          👌

        • Nicholas Browning

          I have to give you credit. Your style is rough and all over the place. The flow variates, It's unkempt. That doesn't mean it isn't good though. Your use of actual history makes me feel like I've lost a bit, haha. I'm actually in the process of writing something similar, but it won't be ready for another few months. The fact that you included Osiris in this blew my mind, and made me keep reading. Well done, wonderful job.
          P.S.
          Harsh criticism means I like it quite a bit.



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