I'm lost in the creation of my mind, the only thing I do good is waste time, I'm a failure, misfit and a huge disappointment, when I try to do good I just don't get the point, my life's a mistake just like everything that I do, if you were to be me you'd think it too, I can't do anything right I'm huge mess up, yes I am nice and I'm not really stuck up, but this world doesn't like nice anymore, they like rude and people who are mean to the core, I'm just a simple guy trying to live his life, but always meeting his match faced with strife, I would do anything just to not be the guy everyone looks at with disgrace and disgust, as they killed the guy inside with a single thrust, my life isn't simple nor is it easy, but once these days I'm going to be gone and y'all are going to need me, but I'll be lost in the creation of my mind.
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Author:
jwill52 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: All my poems I write are written according to how my feelings are at the time. I hope y'all enjoy these words.
- Category: Reflection
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Welcome jwill!
I like your writing. Here is a question: Are we creating our mind, or is our mind creating us?
Creation of mind, huh. Lemme tell ya bro, just be you. Nice? Not stuck up? That's good in my book. Pardon my french, but the only time I'm an ass to someone is when they disrespect me. I'm nice otherwise. There's nothing wrong with it! Life isn't simple for anyone, everyone makes mistakes. It's how you prevail after falling down that defines you as a person. Best of luck J, and happy writing.
keep concentrating on writing. it will do you a world of good. stop worrying what others think of you. don't close yourself off, sometimes you may have to though. remember to keep an open mind.
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