The world we live in is a fucked up place
we just turn a blind eye and say our grace.
We live in a world where people hate because of race.
We live in a world with an alarming suicide rate.
We live in a world where all it takes to be great is having
a famous daddy and releasing a porn tape.
We live in a world where the "way we were raised"
is an acceptable reason to delegate hate.
We live in a world full of innocent inmates.
We as people need to consolidate and raise ourselves above all the hate.
We can rebuild the world that has begun to degenerate.
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Author:
Kaden Hudson (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 12th, 2017 12:29
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Comments3
Don't expect anyone to change your world for you. It's your world, you have as much right to shape it's future as anyone else.You have more right to shape it than an old git like me.
Kaden, well written, and when you are right you are right.
We can and we should rebuild this world. But where to start?
It's gonna be inside you, and me, and him, and her. Your poem very aptly describes the problem, now we need a blueprint to solve it.
powerful statements that you need your backing up in poetry with answers given in your poem by the same way you started it. with words. then we can make a full comment with the correct ending to your work. it's something all poets have issues achieving, to end the poem with the same relation to the beginning. give us some answers first next time then tell us whats wrong with the world. or even better, just tell us about all the fruity things in life and how we get them. that's a thinker for you right there. good luck my friend.
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