Together

MissileOfUncertainty

A flower;
A weed.


Side by side.


Together they grow;
Together they die.

  • Author: MissileOfUncertainty (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2017 22:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: (I know it's not long- but I just wanted to show that poetry doesn't need to be long- to have a huge impact.)
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 21
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  • AmandaJade

    short but sweet, love it!

  • burning-embers

    You are right and i have said it many times. A short poem is a punchy one.
    This is exceptionally thought provoking and a excellent strong write.

    • MissileOfUncertainty

      Awe shucks, you flatter me so ;P

      Don't get me wrong, beauty can be found in length of poetry. Though I find there's a unique draw towards the simplicity of short poems.

      • burning-embers

        No flattery i assure you. Most of my work is not short but i invite you to look at my short offering "what need in me for kisses" which people commented was punchy and thought provoking.

      • FredPeyer

        This is just great, describes me and my wife perfectly. Ah yes, you guessed right, I am the weed, and we are still growing! 🙂 Thank you for a great poem.

        • MissileOfUncertainty

          No problem, thank you for reading! Hey, nothing wrong with being a weed. I, personally, love dandy lions!

          • FredPeyer

            I actually wrote a poem about them. Maybe one day I will share it.

            • MissileOfUncertainty

              You should ^~^



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