A flower;
A weed.
Side by side.
Together they grow;
Together they die.
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Author:
MissileOfUncertainty (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 12th, 2017 22:13
- Comment from author about the poem: (I know it's not long- but I just wanted to show that poetry doesn't need to be long- to have a huge impact.)
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
short but sweet, love it!
Thank you so much ^~^
You are right and i have said it many times. A short poem is a punchy one.
This is exceptionally thought provoking and a excellent strong write.
Awe shucks, you flatter me so ;P
Don't get me wrong, beauty can be found in length of poetry. Though I find there's a unique draw towards the simplicity of short poems.
No flattery i assure you. Most of my work is not short but i invite you to look at my short offering "what need in me for kisses" which people commented was punchy and thought provoking.
This is just great, describes me and my wife perfectly. Ah yes, you guessed right, I am the weed, and we are still growing! 🙂 Thank you for a great poem.
No problem, thank you for reading! Hey, nothing wrong with being a weed. I, personally, love dandy lions!
I actually wrote a poem about them. Maybe one day I will share it.
You should ^~^
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