Please Don't, Don't Look At Me
Some reason I don't want to look
Into your eyes those eyes
The eyes that tell a story shows a feeling
The window to your soul I chose to close
A long long time ago
You never closed my window I see you
Peeking at my soul please go
I wanna cover my feelings but you see
Me the me I don't want to be close me
Shut me out let me be
Please Don't, Don't Look At Me
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- Comment from author about the poem: It shows how people are so scared to show how they feel they rather be alone then show
- Category: Short story
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I like this a lot but you've confused me. Lines 3, 4 and 5 imply you dont want to see into the other person whereas the ensuing lines imply you dont want yourself seen into. Nonetheless this is a powerful piece and of ideal size/length to do the job. Nice one.
It means I don't want to get to connected to the other person I want that person to be able to shut me out without me being hurt by it I don't want to be too connected to the point when I want them to be connected to me I want to be alone in other words no strings attached you know
bravo solitary woman.
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