Tainted

Brie

A full heart it once was, 

Now it's a little bruised

It's okay though, really 

Happy days they used to be, 

Now they're a little grey

Genuine smiles we used to give, 

Now they're a little fake

It's okay though, really

Tear dropping laughs we used to crack, 

Now they're a little forced

Now here we are, 

Eye to eye 

What do I say?

Do I say I love you? I hate you? Or how was your day?

I'm lost for words, as you have been before

But now this is different

Me you chose to ignore

So I give my small fake smile, and you do the same

Then we break eye contact and walk separate ways

 

 

  • Author: Brie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 13th, 2017 15:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: *Forgery will not be allowed.* No copies of any kind. Please enjoy. ©2017
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 26
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  • Nicholas Browning

    A faded love, such a bittersweet thing. Bravo.

    • Brie

      Thank you. It's kind of a theme I've got going here, I've come to realize. But not all my poems will be like this, I guarantee.

      • Nicholas Browning

        Good. Variety is spicy.

      • Louis Gibbs

        The end of a relationship that just fades away can be a more difficult experience than one that ends abruptly, can't it? Either way it hurts, even if in the long run it's for the best. Appreciated your poem, Brie.

        • Brie

          I'm glad you liked it!

        • FredPeyer

          Brie, I really, really like your poem (repetition of really done on purpose!), there is so much written between the lines. If the age given in your bio is correct, I would say you write extremely well for your age. And I do like that last line. It makes it final, no more guessing.

          • Brie

            Thank you! I've been writing for years now, and I'm glad I found this place! I'm happy you enjoyed my poem, feel free to read my previous ones if you want! I appreciate your comment very much.



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