Some of us wish to travel in time
To go places we've never been before
Escape reality and undress my mind
There.. Is where you will find a place you've longed for.
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Author:
Bella Cortez (Pseudonym) (
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interesting
Thank u!
Less is more! And what more could you say? Absolutely beautifully thought out and presented. Most men are straight away going to thing sexually about this but there is sooooo much more in your meaning. This is the BEST i have read on here by a long mile! +fav's
Yes you totally get what I am writing here! So not sexual.. yet mentally beautifully defined in true meaning of what hides inside the mind. It's more written in the way of don't like me for only my looks but dig deeper inside me. Our minds are beautiful too.
Bella, that expression "undress my mind" is out of this world (well you did say to escape reality). No, seriously, this is a wonderful way to say "get into my mind". And some of our minds are only dressed in summer cloths, easy to get into, while others wear armor.
I really like this poem.
Thank you !
only in my mind,as i travel through time
: )
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