"In such a situation is the Sun,
That he doesn't seek to give light by day;
He wants to be like the Moon: a bluff;
He is no longer in a park giving light.
"Would they not meet by day?
The Sun is bigger than the Moon, it doesn't spin.
That is why the Moon shines fiercely,
She no longer wants to get married warmly.
"Maybe they aren't the one to the other,
But is it coincidence to pull both... and thread?
It isn't foolish love between them and a sharp edge.
"Twenty-four hours in a forest, alone.
I prefer winter now, and today
I have heard the sound of summer,
"Telling me: The Sun is no longer hot".
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Comments2
Freaky stuff. Props for the title.
It is a sonnet, it has two quartets and two triplets. But, I ended up with a free verse. It's the first one I do. Bro' i want to know that means: Props. Thank You.
Props: credit.
"I give you credit for the title."
Thank for you, my friend. So much.
You're welcome man! Happy writing.
Great write
Thank you for you type. Blessings.
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