Without You

myself and me

The light is so bright, it hurts my eyes.

The night is too dark, it swallows me in whole.

The silence is so vast, it empties my soul.

The wound is too deep, it tears me into pieces.

I feel hollow and I m in sorrow.


Lingering on your soft whisper,

Longing for your gentle touch,

Waiting for you to come back,

Thinking to hold you tight.


Without you, the Sun is so pale,

Without you, the night is so long.

Without you, nothing make sense,

Without you, the world comes to the end.

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 14th, 2017 12:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: write at the moment when separate with my love.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 71
  • User favorite of this poem: private poet.


  • burning-embers

    yes, that feeling of great loss take the zest out of everything and colours diappear. All that matters is the one in your focus. Good writing

  • Nicholas Browning

    Separation from a loved one is a difficult thing to endure. Good work.

  • FredPeyer

    Between the well written lines I can feel the longing....

  • WL Schuett

    Love poem filled with longing ....cool poem

  • private poet

    Such true thoughts and feelings expressed in your writing. Feels like we are travelling the same road. I am grieving the loss of my husband. Hope you will be happy again soon.

    • myself and me

      Thank you. I am on track now.

    • Neville

      there is clearly a longing here .. an ache I can very easily relate to, as I'm sure many others here can to .......... N

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