Inhale means to breathe in.... exhale means to breathe out, we use our noses and mouths to inhale and exhale... oxygen is one of the most important things to the human body.... depending on the oxygen we get we can live or die... toxins of the world start to penetrate our body through oxygen, controlling if we die or live.... all the bad toxins go straight to our brain and eventually shut everything down, killing us slowly but surely... toxins of the world have enter our bodies and slowed down our heart beat, weakened our breathing, and eventually killing us in the end... some think evil is born and I think that’s incorrect, no one is born evil they are made evil... but what makes them evil? The pain and the misfortune that they have been through.... and no don’t turn my worlds around and say that I’m saying everyone turns evil after going through those things... some of us carry it with us and others leave it in the past... toxins penetrates all of our bodies but it only stays in some of us... wait just breathe, inhale and then exhale...
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Lost Girl (Pseudonym) (
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To be born is to begin to die. Toxin and life, both in the same breath.
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Deep.
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I live with a little faith, and I live with a little chaos. Evil can be a good thing. Sometimes it's required to get certain things done in a way that "Good" never can. That's just me though. I'm not perfect, never will be. We live, we die. Simple as that. As for this work of literature, it seems to just be simply stating that our air is polluted and some people live with the evil they acquire and some don't. True enough. Not everyone is the same.
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You pose such a question. Who knows. What confounds me is - with all the talk of good works, of love, peace and compassion which we see plenty of all around the globe, there is still the dark, quiet unspoken evil in mankind. If only we could breed it out of us. But we are animals. Really provocative writing thank you.
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