You were
the illusion of illumination
so bright and brilliant
I couldn't see the darkness
veiled within you.
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Author:
Nicole Brant (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 14th, 2017 22:04
- Category: Love
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You were
the illusion of illumination
so bright and brilliant
I couldn't see the darkness
veiled within you.
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Comments5
Nicely put together Baylee. This does its job well, I think.
Very very nicely written Nicole! I do like it.
A facade is a powerful tool indeed. If they don't want you to see it, you never will. Short and to the point, never a bad thing. Keep it up.
Another of your power pieces. My minds eye sees this mans photo pinned inside your wardrobe and your verse boldly written across it.
Good writing.
Thank you everyone
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