I went through your phone whilst you slept.
I don't know why but I felt something bad.
I opened the apps and closed them again.
I can't believe the words that you had said.
I did not wake you.
I could not speak.
My hands trembled as I fell to my knees.
When I was calm I crept by your side.
You awoke to me with tears in my eyes.
Say you love me?
But I know the truth.
I went through you phone.
I am Fat, Ugly, Unattractive, and Disgusting to you.
Say no more...
For these are all things I feel about myself.
But YOU said them.
and YOUR words hurt like hell.
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Author:
CSAllenPoems (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 15th, 2017 00:35
- Comment from author about the poem: This is beyond personal reach.
- Category: Sad
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Comments5
That is very deep. I can relate to your poem on a personal level
Thank you for reading it means a lot.
This is some brutal stuff. I've been here before, you have my heartfelt empathy. People like that are better off having nothing. Persevere! You'll make it.
Thank you man. You guys (the readers) are the only people I can really talk to about this.
If you feel the need, or just want to talk it out, you can send me a private message. If not, that's fine too. We're all here for each other. Poetry connects people like nothing else. It's like putting your soul on a piece of paper and handing it out for people to look at. It's a scary thing that takes a lot of courage. I don't mean to sound like Dr. Phil or anything, but you're in good hands here.
Ouch! baby. This is a brilliant write. You gave me your pain in this i felt for you. No huge rant from you here, no outpouring filling my page and boring me. What you've done is chosen just the right amount of words and lines to sock me right in the guts. Really good writing.
shock to find out that way
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