The sky hung low with weight of my devotion

Warm colours flare and embrace your every word

Forgetting our doubt as we lay for hours in the grass that roots from past rejections

Heartache never touching our love as we know that this is forever

Embers of undeniable trust dance along the clouds

Easy and simple yet so meaningful

For love doesn’t silence the fever it numbs it so deeply

you forget it was even there to begin with

  • Author: ali.louise (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 15th, 2017 03:58
  • Category: Love
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  • FredPeyer

    What an incredible first line!
    I do like your poem ali.louise
    Feed us some more!

  • burning-embers

    Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. A celebration of enduring love. A stolen moment to rejoice in what was and what has become buried in familiarity and the day to day. Never seen this expressed with such sensitivity and romance. +fav's

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