Swirling, foaming waves of spray
Filled my senses with awe and wonder;
Sunlight danced on lazy stones and patterned seaweed nestled at my feet.
A tumultuous noise of surging waves
Completed a picture of peace.
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daisychain (
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What a beautiful entry into this family of poets, Daisy! Welcome to MPS.
Thank you Louis.
Welcome to the site Daisy,
Living on an island with waves all around I must say you captured this magic moment perfectly.
Thank you Fred. Wish I did live there (in Portland I mean)......a special place to me.....but no longer do I have a connection there.
Daisy, am not sure I understood correctly. I live in Hawaii.
I'm in the UK, and Portland is a small peninsula off the Dorset coast.
So sorry, I guess I have to take up geography lessons again! When you wrote Portland I automatically assumed Portland, Oregon. But no matter what coast or even ocean we are looking at, your poem is exquisite!
I love the dichotomy of "tumultuous" and "surging" completing the peace. Warm welcome!
Thank you so much Heather.
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