Candlewitch

Dead Seas (by eddy styx)

"Dead Seas"

mindless coupling
groping in the dark,
begins the suffering
doth strand the heart,
in pathos play.
frantic echoes
ensnare, entangle, enmesh
BEWARE
players of games,
become the games they play!

 

*eddy styx is my Male, murderous alter-ego who writes dark poetry!

Comments12

  • Lost in Murphy

    Leave the light on, better to see you with my dear.😇
    Love the poem.

    • Candlewitch

      dear LiM,

      let the light shine! thank you!

      ever, eddy
      *hugs, Cat

    • Michael Edwards

      Great work and I love the last line. quite by coincidence I have just written a couple of couplets very much along the same lines.

      • Candlewitch

        dear Michael,

        where can I read them? have you posted them yet?

        *hugs, Cat

        • Michael Edwards

          they are still in my rough note book but I'll pop them on on Tuesday - Monday is reserved for Ophelia if I finish it - I'll let you know.

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        • Louis Gibbs

          We've all met the game players, haven't we! This poem is a finely stated warning of them. Well done, Cat.

          • Candlewitch

            thank you, Louis. have a great day!

            ever, eddy
            *hugs, Cat

          • onepauly

            like a mystery novel?

            • Candlewitch

              not really a mystery, pauly, it's pretty straight forward. how are you today, good, I hope?

              ever, eddy
              *hugs, Cat

              • onepauly

                I'm doing fine. I like your new picture. and don't worry everything is a mystery to me.

              • orchidee

                Now should I meet eddy? Does he bite?! heehee.

                • Candlewitch

                  dear orchidee,

                  I think he might surprise you ;)

                  ever, eddy & cat

                • Candlewitch

                  hey pauliy,

                  most things are a mystery to me too... like why do people act the way that they do?

                  *hugs, Cat
                  ever, eddy

                • Its Raskolnikov

                  I like it, sounds like the beginning of a very good book

                  • Candlewitch

                    hello Raskolnikov,

                    thank you! I wish... LOL

                    ever, eddy
                    *hugs, Cat

                  • valene

                    eddy you've come thru again with your open, honest and, straight forward truth! game players are only out for themselves and their self satisfaction! your love your ending...ties it all up in a neat little 'bow'...though i can't see you with a bow unless it's the kind that needs and arrow to go with! :)

                    • Candlewitch

                      hello val,

                      you know from personal experience about being played by those nasty little games. game-players are true sh!t-heads... deserving of a slap up-side the head with a ton of bricks!

                      ever, eddy
                      *hugs, Cat

                      • valene

                        We sure do eddy!

                        OX,
                        'Chaos & Bitch' :) :)

                      • Nicholas Browning

                        A dark theme easily seen! Well done.

                        • Candlewitch

                          thank you Nicholas!

                          ever, eddy

                        • malubotelho

                          I love this little poem. As good as ever. So true what those lines says. Players sometimes gets played. Me to love your hair. So beautiful.

                          • Candlewitch

                            thank you malu!

                            ever, eddy

                            p.s.
                            and Cat thanks you for the compliment on her hair ;)

                          • Renzi

                            Marvelous! Playas gonna play. Karmas gonna come. 💓

                            • Candlewitch

                              dear Renzi,

                              I just knew you would understand ;)

                              ever, eddy
                              *hugs, Cat

                            • Micalina

                              Great write looking forward to reading more of your work

                              • Candlewitch

                                thank you, Micalina, for all of your comments...it was very kind of you to take the trouble :)

                                ever, eddy

                                • Micalina

                                  No worries I appreciate reading different types of poetry.
                                  Cheers
                                  Micalina



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