Oops

ElenaGrace

theres one reason I'm alive

so I don't make loved ones sad

but one day I'll be selfish

oops my hand slipped, my bad

  • Author: ElenaGrace (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 16th, 2017 10:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is a rough draft and since right now the language is pretty simple I'm wondering if I should change the poem so there's less basic words. Please tell me what you think, criticism requested.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 26
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

✔ Receive the ebook in seconds ✔ 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments3

  • Domi

    Its very well written and I think its just fine the way it is. I pictured what you were writing and it leaves my mind to think. Were you trying to make a specific point or idea to why this is a rough draft?

  • onepauly

    keep writing that's the only way you are going to find out.

  • burning-embers

    I think its great, love the humour!



To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.