mm121314

Desired

The darkness I pray to be consumed by. That worry free and relieving darkness I long for. The absence it makes me feels when I don't  receive it. The guidence to my desired place I hope for but cannot reach on my own regardless of my efforts too. A place where my body lays untouched and peacefully. My mind free to roam where it desires. My lights completely off leaving me to drown in my own thoughts. A gentle breeze from my fan brushes against my skin. But  I lay with my poor restless eyes awake, relaxed and longing, praying, craving my desired place of a gentle an deep slumber that I have yet to recieve. 

Comments3

  • kpomeroy4119

    This is a very good first poem and I liked the message in it

  • onepauly

    the darkness, is this about suicide?
    maybe you could desire the lightness

    • mm121314

      It's not about suicide it's about sleep, I have trouble sleeping so I wrote a poem about it:)

    • JaneEVE

      A good write look forward to more.
      Horrible when can not sleep .



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